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This is the character list of my story called "Revelations of Valkyrie". Currently [as of 03/4/16], there are 11 known characters in the story. In this 1st post, I will give information to the main protagonist.
The main protagonist:
Codename: Valkyrie
Real Name: Unknown (Tho you can see a hint at the beginning)
Age: 22
Sex: Male
Height/Weight: 64 in./162.6 cm.; 115 lbs./52.2 kg.
Hand: Left
Personality: Quirky
Strength: Creative thinking
Flaw: Cleithrophobia (fear of being trapped)
Birthday: June 2
Occupation: Dark Soul General
Bio: Valkyrie is an air force Dark Soul who can think of possible and occasionally unorthodox ways in given situations. Despite being a general, he is vulnerable to fear of being trapped, where it makes him get really anxious about getting ambushed, so he would tend to open windows and sometimes doors to keep him calm enough, though this fear is weakened if he's not by himself. Some say that he really looks like his mother, which makes some complications among the ranks. He likes to ride the most.
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The main characters:
Codename: Scottsman
Real Name: ??
Age: 44
Sex: Male
Height/Weight: 80 in./203.2 cm.; 250 lbs./113.5 kg
Hand: Right
Personality: Stubborn
Strength: The strongest
Flaw: Underestimating a little too much
Birthday: November 11
Occupation: Dark Soul General
Bio: Scottsman is a Dark Soul tank general who boasts his own strength and for his tough talks. Due to his hardy nature, he is naturally stubborn, which have made occational conflicts with other high command officers in the past, but is nevertheless capable. There are rumors that his personality stems from a traumatic past, but that is yet to be known. He is the biggest commander in the army.
Codename: Krystale
Real Name: ??
Age: 26
Sex: Female
Height/Weight: 70 in./177.8 cm.; ??
Hand: Right
Personality: Charming
Strength: ??
Flaw: ??
Birthday: August 20
Occupation: Dark Soul General
Bio: TBA
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Facing fear alone is a flaw?
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well I'd say yes. If a person is alone and is believes that the area is haunted or so, he/she will be affected if staying for very long time, which could damage the mind. Although it could be removed by medical assistance or just simply breathe clean air. I might change it to something else tho. It just popped up to me when I thought of the abandoned base being real frightening and to show Valkyrie's flaw during that part.
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Fear =/= flaw
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Apercent wrote:Fear =/= flaw
It can actually count, depending on the severity of the fear and the environment. A flaw has to be maladaptive (that interferes your life), which it is applicable to fears. My idea of Valkyrie afraid being alone is can be valid as my thought of the character that he is strong with another person, but he can be really fearful and real anxious if being alone in a many unwelcoming, dark places like an abandoned base (large, destroyed areas, no electricity, very dark), a very dark forest, etc., which it would be linked from his past. Let's say he's gonna go to sleep, but he don't like to sleep somewhere dark all by himself, so he'd open some lights to relieve him.
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A personality flaw isn't the same as a fear. A flaw is a mistake IN you. For example, I think I'm smarter than everyone else (and I'm not). That's pride.
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it's not neccessarily about the mistakes, it's mainly what could interfere a person's life, whenever it's in egos, the handicapped, or any disadvantages.
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Well their must be a personality flaw. Believe me, it's nigh impossible to write someone without flaw. It's probably best to give him a personality flaw sooner than later
When I meant mistakes in you, I meant mistakes in your character/personality. Mistakes in your soul.
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